2019上海市中考英语作文，上海中考英语作文

1，上海中考英语 作文

应试的英语作文要分段干嘛……应该是不空的，反正初中英语作文没有换行要空行空格的说法，实在不行就扩点字，一行里后面省点空格让老师知道你是在这里换行了，比如说你拟稿的时候用want to do发现正好满一行，但又想让批卷老师知道你在这里换行另起一段的话就用would like to do就好了，道理是一样的，在保证正确率的情况下能用从句更好另外英语作文也不用写很多，多了可能有错误，语法错误在规定的时间内自己检查不一定检查出来

because i hope my school become a green语法错误，要说成because i hope my school to become.first改成first of all，second改成further more at last改成last but not the least.这样改了之后语言更加丰富the trees 最好把the去掉，不要去强调它。最后那个very 改成more。别的好像还好。

上海中考英语作文

2，2019中考英语作文范文都有什么

我整理了几个中考英语作文的范文来和大家分享一下，希望通过阅读借鉴会对同学们的中考备战有帮助。 2019年英语作文中考范文 1、My Low-carbon Life The environmental pollution is worse and worse today. Many trees are cut down, and water and air are polluted. As a student I try to have a low-carbon life to save energy and reduce pollution. Firstly, I often walk to school. It can reduce air pollution. Secondly, I always turn off the lights and fans when leaving the classroom. Thirdly, I always make full use of paper and other school things and never waste water. I wish more students to join me and make the earth more and more beautiful. 2、Friends What are friends? We often talk about the topic with others. I think friends are those people who can help you when you are in trouble. Dont forget the saying, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.” Friends can tell you your mistakes, though what they say is hard for you to listen to. You can share your happiness, trouble and worry with friends. Someone also says, “You cant walk any step without a friend.” So I think friends are very important to us. I would like to make as many friends as possible. 3、How to Deal with Our Study Problems Although we often feel stressed, we should find suitable ways to deal with stress. We can wear calm colours like blue and white to make us feel relaxed. We should be careful enough, because “a miss is as good as a mile”. We should also achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies. Try to plan your spare time well. Dont lose heart at any time. You will make great progress through hard work. When having problems, we can ask people around us for help. Its not wise to keep our worries to ourselves. 4、Walk for children in poor areas Not long ago, our school organized a charity walk to raise money for children in poor areas. It was on Saturday, 23 rd October. We walked from the school to the centre of the city. Before the walk, we grouped ourselves into a team of four and planned everything well. It was a hard (tough) work. But during the walk, we supported and helped each other. With the help of many people, we raised over (more than) 50,000 yuan in the end. We all felt tired, but we were very happy. Because it was a meaningful experience and it was an excellent chance to learn team spirit.

2019中考英语作文范文都有什么

3，大家看看我写的上海中考英语作文能得几分指点指点

有高级句式的应用，但同样也有幼稚的语言（比如I hope more people will join this club and more people will know the importance of animals可以用下省略句，改为I hope more people will join this club and know the importance of animals这样不啰嗦）但总体可以，满分18的话若判卷不很严格14，,15分吧

17分。

15分吧

语法没问题，内容不算俗套，16分左右（看批卷老师心情）

语法:7分(满分8分)略有小问题内容:6分(满分7分)有点不实在组织结构:1分(满分3分)混于一段酌情另加文采印象分:1分最终得分:15分(误差正负0.5分;区间:15.5分-----14.5分) 上海市中考英语阅卷中心组老师评

大家看看我写的上海中考英语作文能得几分指点指点